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Jane Austen · 01:33 PM

Michael, Some time ago you asked me for criticism. I tried to send you something about the poem by your email address, it was sent back to me. I don't dare post my suggestion here because I know there would be a big outcry. Not that I don't like it, but there is one word I think could be left out.

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Jane Austen Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 790 Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: .Massachusetts	07-25-2006, 07:10 AM Michael, Some time ago you asked me for criticism. I tried to send you something about the poem by your email address, it was sent back to me. I don't dare post my suggestion here because I know there would be a big outcry. Not that I don't like it, but there is one word I think could be left out. Last edited by Jane Austen : 07-25-2006 at 01:33 PM.